1 min readDec 3, 2016
This is an incredibly solid ending line. I like the way it ties the poem together. I get a sense of a change in the seaons, but perhaps a change in life too?
Nicely done. Very nicely done.
I am more than breath & bones. I am nectar in waiting. “You write like a jagged, beautiful dream.” ©Martha Manning •https://acorneredgurl.com