This… the last stanza begs to become apart of something more. The entire poem reads like a narrative poem and I am now left waiting to see what happens next. Even with haiku, you drew readers in with such few words.

I am happy to see that you have not lost one ounce of know how in this area.

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I’m more than breath & bones, I’m nectar in waiting — Owner ACG •Editor PSILY •Writing for the cosmos. •https://acorneredgurl.com

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